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4:15 in twenty twenty
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4:15 in twenty twenty |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the four o nine again at four fifteen slipping metal scenery from the coastal suggestions she screams at the islands vulture song with wolf voice makes the sin men shiver and jump for gravel salvation lest their black ink runs into red ink erasures down town where the sweepers sort keys and hide the backward census from the travel bag braggers that come to cozyville on sunday to buy statues of saint dean and pepper flavored rosaries cause nothing bad happens in muerta _____________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (11-01-2006 09:06 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice one DS |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and the isle remains shrouded in fog... where dreamers of desire roam...  smiling at you, for this... |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~~~flash photo landscapes~~~ love what you do with it~ ~beLLe |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You bring the simplicity of still to the vivid of life babe. You do it so well D~ vulture songs with wolf voice incredible lines... I am but a humble follower of your words.  always wanting more. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ps, thanks lady for stoping in ______________ ms bel1e, thank you for your eyes again ______________ ms sun, just the tagger tips from v-town, thanks lady friend _____________ ms gs, thanks babe for the wave and write |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A quite impressive write! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms marg, humble thanks lady friend |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"the four o nine again at four fifteen" I need a ticket to ride Stranger |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, enjoy the view ladyone, it is silver sided in the night yawn, thanks for the eyes |
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amberhues Member
since 2006-11-01
Posts 93 |
Wow! What talent I am finding in these blue pages! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
amber, welcome to the piptown, thank you for looking in. |
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