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themute
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since 2006-05-08
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Maryland

0 posted 2006-10-31 10:16 PM



A ring upon a finger;
Your crystallized delight
Left springing epithalamium.

It was the day,
We were two children,
Our dramatic affair.

My most fleeting moment,
Told away by a knocking,
Quickly recognized, Lust.

Peering toward oblivion
On the brightest dusking sun,
I’ll be beaten not again.    

I am the two-toed wanderer

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1 posted 2006-10-31 10:49 PM


your words are pleasing to ones eyes and heart.  i enjoy~  ever hear of the two toed wonderer who plays and sings, i only saw him once, amazing, he has no arms,  your name ttw, makes me think of him.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
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Michigan
2 posted 2006-11-02 01:43 PM


Matt,

This radiates your usual high quality. But then, I never expect anything less of you.

Sandra

DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
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Buenos Aires, Argentina
3 posted 2006-11-02 05:04 PM


I really liked it.
as always, your expression is perfect...
excellent work.
as i said in my poem 'one hundred smiles' you sure make my days better,
thanks for sharing!

themute
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since 2006-05-08
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Maryland
4 posted 2006-11-02 09:56 PM


Groves, i have seen -i belive- the two toed wonder, and it is pretty amazing to watch. Thank you for the words, it means something.

Sandra, your complements are always flattering as hell, its always wonderful to hear from you.

Dreamer, my words arn't perfect, i think they are good, but they arn't yet where i'd like. My goal is the mastering of my self expression, this will not be easy and it won't be soon. Your words are encouraging none the less, thank you.  

I am the two-toed wanderer

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