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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2006-10-31 04:24 PM


Malevolence befowls the air, it stirs outside this room.
It's borne upon the stench of death that issues from from the tomb.
Its presence signalled by the creak that sounds upon the stair
no matter that it would appear as if t'were nothing there.

Draw close the coverlet for warmth, for suddenly it's chill.
" A simple draft and nothing more." you tell yourself but still,
the shadows of familiar things have grown suggestive now
in ways that you just can't quite put your finger on somehow.

Uneasy thoughts come into play, evoking childish fears,
" Was that door open partially, has someone else been here? "
You shrug it off, it's just the fact you don't like being alone,
at least you would were you not paralyzed down to the bone.

It's then you know they've come for you, your terror is complete.
" C'mon dad aren't you going to take us out for Trick or Treat? "

© Copyright 2006 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2006-10-31 05:24 PM


haha ... that's great!

Very well rendered terror!

Love,
Margherita

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2 posted 2006-10-31 07:23 PM



LOL...and the walk begins...
in the chill, no less!

It's the creeping leaves
that follow someone's steps
in the leaves

that I cannot see...

that gets to me.




Poet deVine
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3 posted 2006-10-31 10:16 PM


Could you record this one in whispers so I can get the chills for real..?

Loved it...LOL...thanks for a great TREAT!

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4 posted 2006-10-31 10:48 PM


This was great reading!
Thankyou Dr.Moose.

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde

iliana
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5 posted 2006-10-31 11:19 PM


*Laughing*....very cute one!  Happy Halloween!
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6 posted 2006-10-31 11:39 PM


I always enjoy your tales, Doc! ~ and your wit and charm!

Happy Halloween kisses,

EA

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