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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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key ties bowed around a finger neck dressed up to please the caddy man in black with cricket metal music and a shadow recognizes what memory walks behind in cellophane ball gowns just above thigh high lies ticking moments quicker then the liquor of minutes telling the story this time to a blind man with buckets and a credit card always empty wanting more than atrophy can carry in even piggy back dreams when tied keys tai chi the stillness of cupboard hooks __________________ daark scribblenote: just decided not to go, sometimes it is interesting to just watch the stuff hit the fan..part of the UL approval process for fans I guess...damn, now everyone knows how I think |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and a shadow recognizes what memory walks behind *sigh* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I agree with Dixie, that line is fantastic, but this entire piece has so much rolled into it, it's absorbing... Knowin how you think stranger, is a very, very cool thing...  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
It always is electric...how you think, and not predictable, "those ticking moments quicker than the liquor of minutes". To read in your shadow, Daark, is always memorable. ~ Klassy |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ps, thank you dixie _____________ ms gs, thanks lady friend for watching another prozac moment _______________ ms kl, humble thanks please smile into the mirrors and know the warm |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' cellophane ball gowns and thigh high lies ummm hmmmmmm everyone knows what you think about it's the how and how often that's fascinating |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone..fans? thanks hon for your eye traffic |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Yep, gotta go with what Lady said. Always reading -- always enjoying. aziza |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, you make me want oatmeal, thanks babe |
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writergrl Member
since 2006-10-30
Posts 73Las Vegas, Nevada |
I'm trying to grasp your style...this is an evocative piece, your innuendo is amazing; give me time, I hope to follow the same road you do. oatmeal, eh? you touched a cord there, love it! (But I'm sure this is a metaphor for something unique) write on, writergrl "You cannot stain a black coat." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms wg, take your time please, you bless me with your visit |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
i aree sometimes you just gotta write and see what happens good one , ds ~Yenna/Moonkist~ Peace and Namaste : ) O ( : Freedom Now |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms moon, thank you for the touch |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Peeking in the window and liking what I see.  Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...."tai chi the stillness of cupboard hooks" I've told you how graceful you are!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady E, thanks for watching ms ___________ ms martie, thank you lil neighbor for walking by |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
 My spirit will rise |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms g..wink |
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amberhues Member
since 2006-11-01
Posts 93 |
Fascinating and amazing your words are Dark Stranger. I am pleased to have found them. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
amber, thank you for touching |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
love your twists, darkie~always have~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bel1e, thanks little one |
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