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The Lady
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0 posted 2006-10-31 12:42 PM


speculation
never a painter’s quality
yet you ejected
my image
finely
with Lillian lips
sparking up
rainy talks
on chalk filled
boards

your legs crossed
at the ankles
feet gracing my desk
Lillian lips
spread wide  
laughing  
at the light  
you were always
my finest exhibit

© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2006-10-31 01:52 AM


Brava, brava!  Great job, you two!
The Lady
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2 posted 2006-10-31 02:11 AM




thank you
so much jo...


Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2006-10-31 07:01 AM


ladyone and ms dom, and they said the mona lisa smile was something special...enjoyed it
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4 posted 2006-10-31 12:18 PM


Is it possible to be twice as good

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Enchantress
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5 posted 2006-10-31 12:27 PM


FANTASTIC!!  

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

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6 posted 2006-10-31 05:04 PM


Superb and softly sensual...bravo ladies...


Magnus
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7 posted 2006-10-31 05:18 PM


Oh Kate....look up....it has been posted..

sorry, not meaning to step on the garden.


The Lady
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8 posted 2006-11-01 12:23 PM



Page... Monklet...
thank you for another sweet poem

Stranger darlin’
the mona lisa smile cannot compare  
thank you

Doctor Love
a Lillian    
for you...

thank you dear Nancy!

thank you kindly Barry…

Dominique-Simone
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9 posted 2006-11-01 07:07 AM


Thank you everyone, I could not write without, Kate...



Margherita
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10 posted 2006-11-01 11:20 AM


Again, very captivating! Bravo!

Love,
Margherita

Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2006-11-01 11:59 AM


Brava Ladies!  Beautiful writing, you are lovely together!!
Martie
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12 posted 2006-11-01 02:14 PM


Ladies....A melt, like hot buttered toast!  
The Lady
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13 posted 2006-11-01 04:14 PM



I could not write without, Kate...

and yet Monklet
you do
and beautifully too

thank you so much Margherita

gentle Donna
thank you

thank you dear Martie…

amberhues
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14 posted 2006-11-01 05:26 PM


This is such a lovely duet!
The Lady
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15 posted 2006-11-01 05:30 PM




thank you so much
amberhues


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