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Martie
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0 posted 2006-10-30 11:18 PM



She is as graceful
as gentle sway of pond moss
at dusk shivering

The canyon quiets
and yellow wall of mustard
sigh when she is gone


© Copyright 2006 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-10-31 12:21 PM



oh... oh Martie
just too fragile to talk about


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2 posted 2006-10-31 12:34 PM


Gorgeous, Martie!  Hey, I like that new pic of you, too.  *hugs*...jo
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3 posted 2006-10-31 07:19 AM


beautiful
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4 posted 2006-10-31 07:21 AM


dear martie, I enjoyed this little pixel view
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5 posted 2006-10-31 08:17 AM


MartieSis~

EXQUISITE !!!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -         noles1@totcon.com     

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6 posted 2006-10-31 08:23 AM


Martie
It flies like a butterfly
And stings like a bee

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7 posted 2006-10-31 08:47 AM


What a sweet moment! May you have many more -- today!

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8 posted 2006-10-31 08:49 AM


What a lovely capture of moment Martie!! And that new pic of yours is loverly!!!
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9 posted 2006-10-31 12:17 PM


with flick of white tail
she bounds silently away
followed by her fawn

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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10 posted 2006-10-31 12:21 PM


How exquisite Martie!
Lovely moment indeed.
Hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

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11 posted 2006-10-31 08:28 PM



I know the sounds
feel, and air of this...

well done, Sissie!


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12 posted 2006-11-01 08:58 AM


And I add my own sigh for the beauty of this, dear Martie.

I love deers, they are considered "Beings of Light".

Love,
Margherita

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13 posted 2006-11-02 08:00 AM


I just stared and enjoyed the images you paint for me - Paul
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14 posted 2006-11-10 04:26 PM


A gentle and very graceful penning.


Linda

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15 posted 2006-11-17 03:44 PM


What beauty you have brought to these pages. *S*
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