Summer's Fleeting Angels (Haiku)

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JLHunter
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0 posted 2006-10-30 08:18 PM

Summer's Fleeting Angels

Proud dandelions
Don their soft, cotton halos.
Warm winds defrock them.

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

Mr. Omniscient
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1 posted 2006-10-30 08:20 PM

Nice scene set...

JLHunter
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2 posted 2006-10-30 08:24 PM

Thanks, Mr. O.

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

Nightshade

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3 posted 2006-10-30 09:10 PM

Very nicely done & much enjoyed.
Chris

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4 posted 2006-10-30 09:11 PM

very nice

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5 posted 2006-10-30 09:18 PM

I love this one, John....I'm a dandelion lover!

The Lady
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6 posted 2006-10-31 12:35 PM

ahhh... nice one John
love the title

JLHunter
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7 posted 2006-10-31 09:41 AM

Thanks, Nightshade.

I wrote a bunch of these while I was in a contemplative mood.

More, soon!

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

JLHunter
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8 posted 2006-10-31 09:41 AM

Thanks, shadows.

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

JLHunter
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9 posted 2006-10-31 09:43 AM

Hi, Martie!

Well then, let's dedicate this one to you!

John xo

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

JLHunter
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10 posted 2006-10-31 09:45 AM

Hi, TL.

Thanks for saying so, because I am a firm believer that with Haikus, the title is almost as important as the poem.

Every. Word. Counts.

John xo

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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