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JLHunter
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since 2006-10-08

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0 posted 2006-10-30 08:15 PM

Unable to Love

Where did my heart go?
It followed you out the door.
Now, how will I love?

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

Mr. Omniscient
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since 2006-10-28

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1 posted 2006-10-30 08:24 PM

Very impressive... I have to look for more of your writes. Just keep writing.

JLHunter
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2 posted 2006-10-30 08:28 PM

A trifecta of compliments from Mr. O!

Thanks for your kindness.

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

passing shadows
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displaced

3 posted 2006-10-30 09:04 PM

I feel the ache here

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-10-30 09:08 PM

Nice one John..May I add on?

When you turned from me
My heart burst into small bits
A sound no one heard.
.

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

5 posted 2006-10-31 12:37 PM

a sad little lovely

JLHunter
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6 posted 2006-10-31 09:47 AM

Hi, Shadows.

It was one of those "memory" writes. Lost loves... *sigh*

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

JLHunter
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7 posted 2006-10-31 09:50 AM

Hi, Nancy.

Ahhh...the sound of one hand clapping or the tree that fell in the woods. Very nice one, yourself.

John xo

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

JLHunter
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8 posted 2006-10-31 10:00 AM

Hi, TL.

Thanks for the nice thought...

John xo

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

[This message has been edited by JLHunter (11-01-2006 05:51 PM).]

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