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JamesMichael
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Yobo


I was rubbing the wrong legs.
Whispering in the wrong ear.
Kissing the wrong lips.
Things were not as
they appeared.

I was totally out of control.

If there was to be any hope
I had to learn when
to walk away,
and how to
embrace the
concept of
letting go.


JamesLee
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2006


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Good point!
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yeah *sigh*
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nicely done James!
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Enjoyed this one, JamesLee!  *hugs*...jo
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Thank you all for the wonderful responses...James
 
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