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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-10-30 07:43 AM



You

You are a part of what exists
Of earth of sun of mind and mist
Chaos and our thoughts sublime
And will be till the end of time

Shape and form is a part of it
And dream and wile fit into it
Its chaos makes the void exist
And sense that makes the light to twist

Some label it the grand scheme
I say it is the grand dream
Drawn into what ever may be
It is to me the grand we

I live in awe within its core
Accept the chaos change of store
What was before what is to come?
The beating of the drum the sum

For in the sum there is but one
And that will be until its done

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1 posted 2006-10-30 07:46 AM


Very nice Seymour... I enjoyed reading it.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2006-10-30 07:48 AM


I've always liked the thought of the grand scheme
but now I like the grand dream even more!

Good morning Sy

what a nice gifting before I am off to work

iliana
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3 posted 2006-10-30 07:51 AM


Good morning,Sy!  What a nice wakeup poem.  Have a grand day!   ...jo
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-10-30 08:01 AM


Mr. Omniscient
Enjoyed your read and comment.

passing,
Have a wonderful day.

iliana,
Thank you and may yours be just as grand.

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5 posted 2006-10-30 09:04 AM


What a beautiful poem to read on this sunny autumnal day!
Hope yours is a good one Sy!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

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6 posted 2006-10-30 09:49 AM


The sum-total is a 1derful read, Sy

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7 posted 2006-10-30 11:03 AM


Nancy,
Enjoy the day.

Interloper
Enjoyed your comment. Thank you

The Lady
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8 posted 2006-10-30 02:45 PM




now that's a grand thought
Sir Sy
"the grand we"

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2006-10-30 03:00 PM


Lady
I thought You would like it.

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10 posted 2006-10-31 10:09 AM


Good morning, Mr. T.!

I'd say that in the grand scheme of things, you, yourself, are an integral part of earth of sun of mind and mist!

I enjoyed your thoughts sublime! Never stop dreaming! He smiles at your radiance! ~ as do I.

God's Loving Light ~ 'n a whole lotta angel hugs 'n kisses,

EA



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11 posted 2006-10-31 11:38 AM


Earth Angel
Can't ask for more than your giving.

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12 posted 2006-10-31 10:53 PM


LIKE BEING JUSTIFIED AND ANCIENT~

  sweet sy,always an honor to read you~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2006-10-31 11:06 PM


MGROVES
Exactly.

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