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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-10-30 07:27 AM



it was the first time one morning
sometime before another day
knew to knock on the windows
and you were wow in your glasses
with your burly girl hair on

telling about reading to mini man
about crusoe till dawn
the thick book one
that made your hands look small
but he thought you were a giant

and he loved giants with perfume on
that kissed his forehead
when they left for time at the jail
of proper etiquette and policy
but carried their little whips anyway

and then some sunday due to forgetful
you were the savior from saviers
in your gym shorts and burly girl
and it was even earlier then
but pretty was still not the word

for oh hello again and damn wow now
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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-10-30 07:34 AM


very cool
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-10-30 07:36 AM


thank you ms dixie
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2006-10-30 09:00 AM


damn wow now.....oh so cool dark buddie...   still smilin.......
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-10-30 09:06 AM


ms gs, thanks lady
Decaflame
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5 posted 2006-10-30 11:49 AM



no scribbled note?  




Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-10-30 11:54 AM


ms deca, just admiring the lovely morning charm of a cove off of chanel islands..shhhhh don't tell
Decaflame
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7 posted 2006-10-30 12:00 PM



Oh....ok....shhh....

I won't tell anyone....

not even that little bird....




1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
8 posted 2006-10-30 02:18 PM


i want...

and a scribble note too
giggle

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2006-10-30 03:20 PM


ms deca, spank you very much..

_____________

ms slick, I enjoy your giggle sounds

The Lady
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10 posted 2006-10-30 05:48 PM




doesn't seem to matter what you say
too much
Stranger darlin'
it's just
damn wow now time
again...


Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2006-10-31 09:16 AM


ladyone, yes, sometimes just a damnwow and then tomorrow comes..thanks for the eyes ms
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