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The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest

0 posted 2006-10-29 11:21 PM




seven circuit
make the turn
shift awareness
set fox spirits free

walk the labyrinth
feel each part
bare feet  
cold earth  

follow the clues
numbers
stars
forms
verse

mind reaching  
upward
backward  
spoondrift thought

search
warp and weft
colors ruby
gold
moss

walk the labyrinth
make the turn
shift awareness

he is there
in plants
structures
splendid
in colors of naked

demon laugh
slips me
to his face
voice smacks of
cold  
feel it?

walk the labyrinth
he will follow
make the turn


© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-10-30 06:59 AM



This attempt
to catch a facet
of one's thought
processes

sits well with me...




Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
2 posted 2006-10-30 07:09 AM


ladyone, perhaps all roads are circles
drawn on the forehead of a demon's mirror...enjoyed this

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-10-30 07:36 AM


this one hit me softly


Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2006-10-30 09:04 AM


mesmerizing....thats the only way I can explain when I read your words....I am mesmerized, and enjoy reading you so very much, sometimes it feels like you have crawled right inside of my mind and peeked through the windows.....LOVE this LadyKate.
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
5 posted 2006-10-30 09:25 AM


Spellbound in the chants of encouragement left for us to savor here.
Excellent imagery.
TD

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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2006-10-30 09:48 AM


I love it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

writergrl
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since 2006-10-30
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Las Vegas, Nevada
7 posted 2006-10-30 01:51 PM


lovely, spellbinding, brava!

write on,
writergrl

Deep_Inside
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i can't stop hiding
8 posted 2006-10-30 02:03 PM


i had to read it a seconed time to realy get it, its nice, thanks
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
9 posted 2006-10-30 05:41 PM




thank you so much  
sweet sunshine


Stranger darlin’  
there are days
when walking the labyrinth  
only brings me closer  
to the source of my bedevilment…
you know?

thank you
dear Dixie...  

thank you
gentle Donna
kindred spirit…

thank you kindly TD

Doctor Love
  

thank you
writergrl

thank you
Deep_Inside


Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12
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10 posted 2006-11-02 05:59 PM


Maybe I was just wrong...: ) but maybe not... love ya
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
11 posted 2006-11-03 01:45 AM




you either were
or you weren't Monklet
love you too


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