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luminosity
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0 posted 2006-10-29 10:17 PM


Within God’s providence, an angel’s
protecting touch can reach heavenward down
and prayers are often answered yes;
but my son, your numbered days have come to an end
and mine now linger past liking
and I must accept that some prayers
are answered no.

One would think that in knowing all this
it would be enough to accept that the time
of your leaving this earth was out of human grasp,
an instant reserved
ahead of this time and this place.

This need for understanding could then be laid to rest
and one could sit back and simply wait for these
spinning questions to find an answerable resting place.

Yet my mind paces as if marching Jericho around.
Way past seven times in seven days
my steadfast footsteps, faith and silence have not
knocked these walls flat.
Did I miss-time my yelling with the trumpets blast?

Or am I, Lord, like the disobedient children
on the way to the promised land,
caused to circle forty years for my wrongs?
If so, I have thirty seven left to go.

Following this new circle of reasoning
I then need  to ask, would the emptiness
left in your stead be easier to accept
if this trial’s finish were, no matter how distant
at least somewhere certain?

But deep inside these swirls of obscurity,
no answers offer themselves as a worthy handhold
to grab on to and so I hope,
I hope and have faith that in the Promised Land
enfolded in my Redeemer’s arms
none of this will matter.

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Decaflame
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1 posted 2006-10-30 01:24 PM


and I must accept that some prayers
are answered no.

~*~

Whether we know the reasons,
or not,
faith reminds us
we are loved.




luminosity
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2 posted 2006-10-30 06:25 PM


thank you...it is hard...as humans...not to question...when the loss is great...but faith remains and for that I am thankful
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3 posted 2006-10-31 07:27 AM


the last verse and line says it all
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2006-10-31 09:52 AM


Sweetie~

I know the 'questioning' ... only too, too well~

'I hope and have faith that in the Promised Land
enfolded in my Redeemer’s arms
none of this will matter.'


Me too ... me too~

Your inked thoughts seep the page
in loving remember moments ....
and they find a soft place to fall~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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luminosity
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5 posted 2006-10-31 03:09 PM


dixie, thank you, and yep, let's hope

marge...I know that you know, the pain, and the questions, thank you lady from my heart

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6 posted 2006-11-17 03:01 PM


and I must accept that some prayers
are answered no.

I think sometimes that's the hardest thing possible to accept... for even as we believe, even as we pray... we also believe we know best and God should cooperate... our pleas are often orders more than requests... and we want to know WHY but only silence greets our ears.

Which brings us to faith... which shines brightly through your words. *S*

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