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tatalinia
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0 posted 2006-10-28 11:13 PM



In a dark corner we settle down
Ready to erase our fears
We embrace as if in a trance-
magnifying our bodies to one another
I take in all that you give
Knowing theres no turning back

So fearless with you, so free
Never felt such comfort from another being
You come to my house
Knocked on my door just when-
I needed you most in my life
Turning on a light switch you light up my life

Bringing a smile to my face
Its like you can't get enough of me-
and I of you
You sit me in your lap and hold me
Is this a dream?
Or did the piercing of your nipple just stick
my heart?


I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

© Copyright 2006 Althia Kinsey - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-10-29 07:47 AM


wow! I love that ending!

cool write, Althia

Mr. Omniscient
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2 posted 2006-10-29 12:58 PM


I agree!
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