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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-10-28 12:10 PM



Thought Darkness ...inspired

Deep inside
those thoughts are hidden in darkness
where only the past lies
with nothing left but the twinning
of a once cared for dream.

Today the cold penetrates,
the memories replaced by steel,
where the chase never ends
and one pays the price of another.

Walking the deadprints,
feeling more than one should,
squeezed by the thought darkness
into a world of the hunted and into
the essence of those tomorrows.

M


inspired by a phrase by Deep_Inside


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2006-10-28 01:46 PM


Maureen,
You just keep getting better and better.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2006-10-28 02:09 PM


thank you Sy, must be because I am so tired... the less thinking I do, the better


M

passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-10-28 05:35 PM


this is kinda sad M

hope you are doing okay

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2006-10-30 04:08 PM


This deserves to be seen and read 'cuz it is good!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Deep_Inside
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5 posted 2006-10-30 05:21 PM


Wow this is good, and not just because i might have had something to do with the inspration. It's like you went back and read some of my old pices. can't wait to read more, thanks
PEBBLES
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6 posted 2006-10-31 12:24 PM


This gave me goosebump's. Thankyou.
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