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Midnitesun
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Gaia

0 posted 2006-10-27 10:40 PM



Low angled sunlight becomes you
as soft shadows caress shoulders

   I want to lean on

times like this
heighten the imagined scent of you

akin to a lingering aftertaste

   bittersweet chocolate

‘though I don’t favor chocolate

I favored you...

the tingle of tongue that remains
   in mere melted musing memory

savored slowly

while in midnight dreams
    we did

‘neath
    low angled sunlight

melt down

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2006-10-27 11:13 PM


Pleasure, written with poise!
I like your style woman.
TD

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displaced
2 posted 2006-10-28 09:53 AM


beauty!
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2006-10-28 11:20 AM


Midnitesun
Love that melt down.

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2006-10-30 04:03 PM


How did I miss this one?
Back to the top!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

iliana
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5 posted 2006-10-31 12:40 PM


Awesome one, Kacy!   ...jo
The Lady
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6 posted 2006-10-31 12:52 PM




delightful Kacy...
in the most sensual way

Margherita
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Eternity
7 posted 2006-10-31 11:43 AM


Very beautiful!! I love the melting ... it hits the solar plexus!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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