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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-10-27 05:26 PM


A Desire To Be Living

I know control,
excel in manipulation,
and I'm skilled in the
fine art of criticism.
I've lived inside of lies
and made loved ones cry,
but these are all things
that I no longer desire.

I have new desires;
to love, my heart to share,
to desire to honestly care,
and to know the value of
accepting and forgiving.
This is the way that
I desire to be living.

JamesLee
01August
2006



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Margherita
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1 posted 2006-10-27 05:30 PM


Dear James, you share your spiritual evolution beautifully and I can but applaud you. That's great!

Love,
Margherita

jarrett
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since 2006-05-10
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2 posted 2006-10-27 06:57 PM


Wow that is a wonderful piece.
Tricia

aziza
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3 posted 2006-10-29 01:10 AM


I like this -- very beautiful.

aziza

passing shadows
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4 posted 2006-10-29 10:26 AM


nice
deleeme
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5 posted 2006-10-29 01:59 PM


It's a noble desire-
To which you aspire--
Overcoming the past,
To be free at last
A new future cast
As True, not a Liar!

I applaud you in your goodly Quest,
Why not strive to be your Best!

Sorry I got carried away=Good read,
Good write!

  David

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2006-10-29 08:20 PM


This write is most excellent James.
Heart hugs.

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

The Lady
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7 posted 2006-10-29 09:07 PM




well said James...

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