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Grinch
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since 2005-12-31
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Whoville

0 posted 2006-10-26 06:16 PM


Thirty-nine sad years to death and still I try
To match a child’s sublime perfection:
“ I eat the wind and drink the rain. “
It humbled Him on Fern Hill in the spring
And beggars me a lesser man the same,
What chance have my words faced with these?

Winter posts fresh doily stamps on glass,
Arthritis screams in pain and I at panes
That telegraph another year undone.
I’m tired of counting useless days
On calendars decked out in loons
That marks each poem passing into trash.

A riot bleating springtime through the field.
Those bouncing bobs whose cares are short
No rhymes for them; no meter slipped or shorn.
I hate the spring the budding and the birth;
No screams for them “I eat the wind”
To wake them sweating in the night

Summer – thighs all waxed and white.
The only good that comes from heat.
Long days of sun and nights of pain
“I drink the rain” she said, SHE said,
While I’m still scratching reasons
Into lines that make less sense.

Well named the fall, I lose more every year.
They beat the flies to ground round here
Rhyme-free square mounds to count them down
And guide my way. If my time ever comes
Score deep these lines above my grave
“He never ate the wind nor drank the rain.”


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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-10-26 06:49 PM


Ahhh, but did you ever notice, those lines you scratch fill with the waters of an endless sky?
Cool write.
TD

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2006-10-26 07:07 PM


"While I’m still scratching reasons
Into lines that make less sense."
Me too. But I've also enjoyed a sip of rain and the taste of a breeze.

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