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Dreaming Alone
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
Once upon a time in a dream long ago i ran thought darkness not to let my face show the cold night was piercing soaking through to the bone and reminded me of desperate feelings from memories of being alone still I persisted to run hiding in shadows of the night nothing driveling these instincts to desperately stay out of sight with every step taken the ground clawed more at my feet promising comfort of death with thoughts of searing heat then i woke up back safe at home nothing seemed out of place but still i was alone |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
enjoyed your words, Matt and have felt this way before... i ran thought darkness not to let my face show did you mean to type "through" darkness? although I like thought darkness but in a different context...  M |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
well done |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you inspired my poem...Thought Darkness thank you M |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
I Liked it a lot..Thanks for sharing! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
excellent work... |
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