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Late October Battle... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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 All day it rained all day the strong wind blew tonight....looking down from my window to gauge the damage I see in the moonlight blood spilled a battlefield of the fallen where shining and wet on the dark ground crimson maple leaves lie. . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a vivid scene! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Outstanding! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Beautifully painted.  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Nancy, this is just beautiful. I love the fall, when the leaves turn colors. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EnchantedLady~ Gorgeous .... just gorgeous~ Our Sycamore tree is shedding her aura of beauty all over the ground also~ Just in time for me to gather those HUGE leaves and paint them for the November and Christmas decorations~ The grandie girlies and I will be busy for the next few weeks, every spare minute up to our 'tickles' in leaves and paint~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nancy...remarkable look through your window. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is so vivid, Nancy, and what a great description! ....I love autumn. sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Nancy, that carpet of fallen leaves really speaks beautifully through your heart and pen! Love, Margherita |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beutifully written. The only kind of war's aftermath to witness  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
dont i remember a recent poet saying when we look at winter-we must believe in another spring?? arthur |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Nancy I scoop it all up your rain leaves wind and keep it for my own it's so vibrant... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
~WOW~ beautiful Nancy Lee ~~~ |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
Wow, I'm visiting the east cost for the first time and this really describes what I’m seeing out here, wonderful thanks |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (does happy unviolent Mother Nature battlefield dance) Yay, this is such a gorgeous verse brilliant with colorful imagery, yay, it makes me want to go roll in the leaves and warble with the songbirds, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dixie, Kathleen & Sy... I'm so pleased you enjoyed this splash of ink. Hugs~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi SuzieQ~I too love the changing of the colours in autumn. Hugs. Marge~You will have to send me pics of the Sycamore leaves after you and the grandie girlies paint them! Hugs and love. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Martie, sky and Margherita~Thank you so very much ladies for stopping by and taking in the view. Hugs. Interloper~Tis indeed the only battleground I wish to see. Good to see you home. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Arthur~But of course there will always be another Spring! Hugs.Lady~You look beautiful holding that bouquet of leaves...hang on while I get the camera. *Click* Thank you, hugs. Chris~Dear sister of mine...it does my heart good to see you writing and back here at Passions. Big welcome home hugs. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
DI~Enjoy your visit to the east coast. Yes I imagine it must look about the same as this picture, and it's the way it looks outside my window right now too! Noah~My friend..I would love to jump in the leaves with you..I'm not too sure about my warbling though. LOL Hugs. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Rusty tears? I would love the colors of fall, the leaves rustling ghostly underfoot as if whispering secrets left by the wind which blew them there. Your picture is such a pretty visual to go with your delightful poem. Nancy, My husband is very happy not to have those fallen leaves to contend with. We have only a 30' holly tree in our front yard. It is baubled and bedecked in bright red berries for the time being. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Karen! I'll bet that tree looks beautiful too! I try not to rake too many of the leaves.. I would rather watch them as they dance on down the street.  Thanks for stopping by. Hugs |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Tinker you paint so beautifully with words. Fall is such a beautiful time of year...unless you happen to be a leaf. Want to help me rake leaves?? believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi scorpio! Never thought of it that way..being a leaf I mean.  I'm really not into raking them... would rather have a good wind carry them dancing and skipping on down the street. Thanks for stopping in.. Hugs and love ya, Tinker  Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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PoetrySinger Member
since 2006-10-16
Posts 54 |
I liek your writings but how about try something that reminds you of your teen age years so I and any other teens can relate |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
PoetrySinger~I appreciate your comments so much! Now my teen years were a long time ago...LOL, but that is a good idea..I just might try that, thank you! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Loved this Nancy - Paul |
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