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Gypsy Moth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: Gypsy Moth My gypsy moth explores my fire Dances close to my desire Titillates my breach of mind Just beyond my reach of bind She’s tamed the dragon at the door He doesn’t guard me any more And now I’m caught in the abyss Expectancy of touches bliss It’s locked around my very soul But cannot fill my weeping goal And brought my infinite to bow And turned it holier than thou So I am bound a Gordian knot Whose tie has made my spirits clot? Promises of golden ties Dreams and wiles of golden lies It may be that flame destroys Desires touch a moth too coy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a fine read this morning, before I start my work day |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Have a good day and thank you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ah, yes! I recall this beauty! ~ and it deserves to be brought back into the light!  Have a glorious day, Sir Flame!   EA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Another coy moth spiraling down in flames  I love this, Sy! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel LOL I know about Angels memories.  Interloper Glad you enjoyed, thank you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Promises of golden ties Dreams and wiles of golden lies" morning or night I do love your work Sir Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady As I love yours. Thank you |
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gypsyheartx Member
since 2006-02-09
Posts 104Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland |
Beautifully written. "Dances close to my desire Titillates my breach of mind Just beyond my reach of bind" Really paints an "emotional picture" if you will. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it a great deal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gypsyheartx Thank you for the read and lovely comment. |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
She’s tamed the dragon at the door He doesn’t guard me any more Seymour - My brain isn't working at all today, and yet I still stop at your words and read them over and over. May take three of four times till the words penetrate but oh how they do. Lovely write! ~ Cheye |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cheye, Your reply was a delight to read. |
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