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dead man and lady pane |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we were the smoke colors there like old golden windows with films that reflected shadows and had cigar smells but the outside of our glass was classy diamonds with just enough sun to make shimmer signs to the sand we would laugh at the wind when it moved us around in our frame and rattled our teeth like hiccup echos on painted lips hiding cold teeth sometimes we thought we would break or fall from being together but a lover's god always made the storms _____________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful D. Nobody does it, quite like you do sir.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! that last line! wow! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
but the outside of our glass was classy diamonds with just enough sun to make shimmer signs to the sand we would laugh at the wind when it moved us around ~*~ daydream imagery... a good way to start a soggy morning.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks lady friend for the wave ______________ ms ps, thank you dear dixie _______________ ms sun, always a window for you my friend |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"but a lover's god always made the storms" storms are wondrous things Stranger and there is the quiet after shhh... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, thank you for blessing this window |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
i love your writing, Dark Stranger... show me more... you make me hot for your tantilizing imagery... woo us, like we've never been woo'd... you have it in you... dazzle me.... i'll return the favor... ~Lady Moonkist~ Freedom Now |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms moon, you swirl my mind with suggestions, thanks for the pleasure of your eyes |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I bite my lips in the wind, but I love how it swirls your words, exchanges smoke for gleam of sunbeams on my mind and leaves to crisp my senses... to fall...yes to fall. ~ Klassy |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms KL, thanks for touching the windows here you are a blessing my friend |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
for once I stood on the inside warm and the only chill that was felt was when I placed my hand to the amber glass |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you can sure warm one up on a cold night  My spirit will rise |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms slick..damn,,you make me want to thanks ms _______________ ms g, thanks for the read ms |
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