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yellow I believe (duet with Dominique Simone)

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The Lady
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0 posted 10-25-2006 04:17 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Lady




while I sat here
alone
a quick flash
bright color
yellow
I believe
spoke your name
landed on my palm
with angora wings
delicately searching

until now
I knew no other way
misplaced
on godís tongue
no feel
no beginning  
no end  
waiting to be
thrust
to the place
I belong

then
your name spoke itself  
in yellow

© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 10-25-2006 04:23 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Absolutely captivating! A moment of sudden awareness, rendered in beautiful poetic language.
My compliments to both!

Love,
Margherita
The Lady
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2 posted 10-25-2006 05:38 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady



thank you very much
Margherita...

The Lady
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3 posted 10-25-2006 05:39 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady



Page
Monklet...

thank you for your words
you amaze me
always
JamesMichael
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4 posted 10-25-2006 07:44 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed...James
passing shadows
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5 posted 10-25-2006 08:24 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

awesome duet! and I think the shortest one I've ever read too...a great blending!
The Lady
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6 posted 10-25-2006 09:50 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady




thank you James

thank you so much Dixie  

  
Dominique-Simone
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7 posted 10-25-2006 10:01 PM       View Profile for Dominique-Simone   Email Dominique-Simone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dominique-Simone

Thank you everyone for your wonderful comments. And thank you lady for your wonderful words. without you could this poem could not have been, nor could I have been a poet at all.

The Lady
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8 posted 10-25-2006 10:16 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady

you give me too much credit Monklet
now I have to go spend it
Hollister maybe?
Earth Angel
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9 posted 10-25-2006 11:02 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Short, but oh so sweet! Thanks to you both for this poetic treat!

Loving Light,

EA
The Lady
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10 posted 10-25-2006 11:06 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady



thank you for your
sweet reply Angel...



Dominique-Simone
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Yes thank you Angel
Dark Stranger
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12 posted 10-26-2006 07:05 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ladyone and dom, a pleasure to see you two entwined in wordspeak, D
The Lady
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I am glad you enjoyed this moment Stranger
thank you
Martie
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Ladies...this was a delight to read...thank  you!!  
The Lady
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thank you for your comment
Martie
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16 posted 10-26-2006 12:20 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

What an exquisite write!
Brava to both of you!

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

The Lady
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thank you Nancy
hugs

  
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18 posted 05-29-2007 07:47 AM       View Profile for MoonShadow   Email MoonShadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MoonShadow


   Powerful.. yet 0h, so elegant! Much enjoyed.

                MoonShadow
.
The Lady
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thank you Kenneth
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