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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-10-25 08:08 AM


My mind is bare
when you are there
slipping through windows
of unrestraint

into thoughts
past limitations of
promiscuous and  properly,

holding me
transcendingly

in mirrored images
through glass
like moments caught
between pages

pressed
                                                    

with ink spilled visions

of yesterday,
today.....

and come, what may.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2006-10-25 08:37 AM


Lovely spell cast in this one Donna...

"with ink spilled visions

of yesterday,
today.....

and come, what may."

Well done.
TD

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-10-25 09:21 AM


ms gs, it is always a pleasure to see your pen play here
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2006-10-25 10:00 AM


Lady TD, thank you very much and I am glad that you enjoyed the spell.

My dark friend, humble thanks to you for reading the ink spills when I play,
with words,  sir.  

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-10-25 03:17 PM




yes Gentle Donna

speaks so softly
lovely

"and come, what may"

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Gaia
5 posted 2006-10-25 03:35 PM


grinning here
as 'come-what-may' playful words
are always a delight from your pen

Margherita
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6 posted 2006-10-25 04:29 PM


quote:
holding me
transcendingly

in mirrored images
through glass



Your visions are delightfully painted here, dear Donna!

Love,
Margherita

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7 posted 2006-10-25 06:25 PM




(smiles) And it is through the gentle, pacifying hemorrhaging of the human heart that all dear poets across communties like these robin-egg blue pages can see the deeper beauties and soft enigmas that truly are the watercolor touch of all existance, yay! (angel friendship hugs) I just love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

passing shadows
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8 posted 2006-10-25 09:28 PM


beautiful
Spine Grinder
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9 posted 2006-10-27 11:22 PM


Yano....Everytime I read the poems you write, that are like this...about a certain someone...It saddens me that this certain someone will never truely appreciate the beauty of your poetry...But I can. And do. Well done.

"My soul is adrift in oceans of madness
Repairing the rift that you have created"~ Disturbed

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

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10 posted 2006-10-27 11:27 PM


Very nice Donna. Always a pleasure to read your writings. hugs, Chris

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde

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