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Dark Stranger
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West Coast

0 posted 2006-10-25 07:00 AM



you do the decorations every morning now
right after night leaves in her jag
you are there on time
four wheel drive
and a mission

with a smile that seems too sincere
to ignore, but any smile would touch
if it came from the same mouth
you said good morning with
just before you disappeared again

when your back turns for a moment
and you glance over your shoulder
to see if I am glancing private
at the sway of your hips
as you make the sun come closer

to the every day morning of dark windows
_______________

daark

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2006-10-25 07:50 AM



Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2006-10-25 08:17 AM


Oh my, dear Stranger, am wearing a smile here....

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2006-10-25 08:30 AM



That green-eyed dawn...
she's a real blinker...



lovely images, Sir...


Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2006-10-25 09:19 AM


ms ps, thanks dixie for the wave

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ms gs, thank you for the smile

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ms sun, thank you lady friend for the peek in

Martie
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5 posted 2006-10-25 10:22 AM


hi DS ....Fog slurs the lips here...can I have some of yours?  
Dark Stranger
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West Coast
6 posted 2006-10-25 11:21 AM


ms martie, sure little neighbor, please help yourself.  thanks for the read
The Lady
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The Southwest
7 posted 2006-10-25 04:20 PM




I like the dark windows
the give and take of this
Stranger...

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
8 posted 2006-10-25 04:49 PM


Love the touch of melancholy in this captivating atmosphere your words create.

Love,
Margherita

Moonkist
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since 2006-09-29
Posts 197
Pennsylvania
9 posted 2006-10-25 07:10 PM


WoW, Dark Lord !!!
...I melted...
Thanks for the millisecond of
...exquisite pleasure...

Peace and Namaste,
~Lady Moonkist~
: ) O ( :

Freedom Now

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
10 posted 2006-10-26 07:03 AM


ladyone, dark moments are lightspend sometimes, thanks babe

________________

ms mar' thank you for letting me touch your eyes for a moment

________________

ms moon, thank you for the visit to my room of stone

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