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Changeing Sands
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Changeing Sands |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
I only walk on the beach As the tide pulls away Compacting the sand beneath my feet And beckoning me to stay To leave my impression On its ever changing face To find myself swept away No longer in the place Driven deep into my mind Pounded in be the surf Searching for why I'm here Asking what my life really worth Looking for no answer Just looking to present my hand So maybe someday later The answers will wash up in the sand [This message has been edited by Deep_Inside (10-25-2006 04:27 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Self searching in the shifting sands...something I can relate to. Hello, and thanks for sharing this thoughtful write. The imagery fits the feelings. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
To stand in the sand is a great way to ponder life's questions ... The extraordinary fact that you are here, makes your life worthy! Well written! Love, Margherita |
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PoetrySinger Member
since 2006-10-16
Posts 54 |
gr8t to me please continu what would u write if you had to make it longer more detail and write a part 2 see where it will go |
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