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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2006-10-24 07:53 PM



Painting With A Silk Ribbon

How warm, the sensation of milk
As it streams me, making white roads
For my mind to follow
As if another heart per chance dreams me
Where I could wander in silken step
Of China bisque attire

The long, sure strokes of midnight
As if another place per sigh light
Where I might turn to face the sky
Along a flaming star to hunger

How fond, the vacillations come in their art form
As if another trail per touch may keep night warm
Softly leaving traces in passions moist
Sledding on a ribbon’s sheen
Painting dawn in satin scheme
As wings move time
Along my backless
Brush

Copyright Kkh 10/24/06

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2006-10-24 08:06 PM


"Sledding on a ribbon’s sheen
Painting dawn in satin scheme
As wings move time
Along my backless
Brush"

As smooth as satin Kathleen.
Breathtakingly beautiful!
Hugs~

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

The Lady
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2 posted 2006-10-25 12:24 PM




"How warm, the sensation of milk
As it streams me, making white roads
For my mind to follow
As if another heart per chance dreams me"

delicious
TD

passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-10-25 07:54 AM


breathtaking is right!
WindWalker
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4 posted 2006-12-17 05:51 PM


I love this one!!!!!!!!!!!!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2006-12-18 06:56 AM


beautifully penned... RDB
twinkyfl1
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6 posted 2006-12-18 09:30 AM


Sledding on a ribbon’s sheen
Painting dawn in satin scheme
As wings move time
Along my backless
Brush

You should have tied this poem up in a satin bow, that's how beautiful it is.

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just out of reach
7 posted 2006-12-18 09:47 AM


Wow !!
hugs, Chris

Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~

trutodaraiders
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8 posted 2006-12-18 01:33 PM


Loved It!
nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2006-12-18 10:12 PM


I agree with everyone else~~and just love it!


M

JL
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10 posted 2006-12-19 11:18 AM


Ditto...

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

jwesley
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11 posted 2006-12-19 08:00 PM


This grabs one and never lets go, my friend...even after the eyes have moved on.

Loved it....

jwesley

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