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Cut Me Into Pieces
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Cut Me Into Pieces |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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MAKE ME!.. Into the one you want into the one you need, Strength comes from your voice that I feed. MAKE ME!.. Feel whole one more time, Before the Death Toll does chime. You're cutting me in two, You're tearing me in three, How many pieces can you take from me? Someone somewhere MAKE ME!... Shine bright in the dark of day, I see your mouth move but don't hear what you say. Oh please God MAKE ME!.. See the war you want the war you need, Rage inside of me just wait and bleed. You're cutting me in two, You're tearing me in three, How many pieces can you take from me? All the things that I've done not to deserve this, All the things I guess I'll never even miss. You're cutting me in two, You're tearing me in three, How many pieces can you take from me? JUST..MAKE ME!! Into the one you want into the one you need, Strength from your voice watch me bleed. You're cutting me in two, You're tearing me in three, How many pieces can you take from me? Time brings change and change comes with time |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My, gosh, you are such a powerful writer! I can feel those raw emotions ~ and they ain't pleasant! ~ but oh, how well you write 'em! Might I add that whenever we allow another person to take our power from us, we are no longer at the helm of our own ship. We can be taken into some treacherous waters and be victimized. Hot Stuff, you are a good, big, strong, smart, man and and I'd like to see you stay all in one piece!  Loving Light 'n hug, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mighty powerful write here Kyle! Well done! Hugs~Nancy Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
none if you walk away hon snatch it all back and get on your way you'll be better off |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
incredible work! |
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