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XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2006-10-24 02:51 PM



Just another ancient pout, found...
A leaf from a tree...long ago uprooted.


I'm lonesome...
and I don't mean
I'm just alone.
I'm so lonesome.
I'm blue clean
to the bone.

It's like a ...
My hearts been walked on, no whiskey, no pills, my dog growls at me, laid off at the mill, Mama just died, empty inside,
low down
kind of
lonesome.

I'm so sad...
Yeah, I'm lonesome
and I'm sad.
I don't know what to do
so I won't feel so bad.

It's like a...
My baby just left me, dog just died, eviction notice, can't have nothing fried, everythings wrong, Hank Williams song,
one car funeral
kind of sad.

Lord, I'm blue.
I'm lonesome,
sad and blue.
I wish I knew
what in the world
I'm gonna do.

It's like a...
Bullet to the brain, ball and chain, broken winged bluebird out in the rain, guitar's pawned, cuss the dawn, so morose almost comatose,
gold gilded overdose
lonesome,
sad,
blue.

© Copyright 2006 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
william foos
Member
since 2006-09-13
Posts 77
schenectady,new york,usa
1 posted 2006-10-24 03:14 PM


intersting form with long arms good thoughts well done
love the papa

i see what i write and write what i see

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2006-10-24 03:40 PM


Uriah,
Why thats so far down, there is no place left but up. LOL

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-10-24 04:01 PM


This is the saddest country song I've ever heard!
You sing it so well...LOL..much enjoyed!
Hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

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