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A Mountains Peak
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A Mountains Peak |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Mountains Peak I climbed a mountains peak last night To see the streaking of the morn Gods paint brush sweeping colors light A palette full of dew of dawn Each stroke lit up the clouds with gold The mountains gray had over tones With tints of red to make them bold I could not see them just as stones Phantoms formed and fantasy bloomed Illusion played a symphony To see these things my mind had groomed Harmonies epiphany I reached out to the coming light To touch it at horizons cleave And soaked my senses with the white To fill this cup of my believe But in the blooming of the day The mountain faded dead away |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You peeka-my-boo with each new penning~ Love ya' *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Well peeka-boo to you.   |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Much enjoyed this morning's read.  I look for your words to start each day. &  , NancyAutumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, And I look for your responce. |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
...what a glorious vision... you always write sooooo beautifully! ~Lady Moonkist~ ...Peace and Namaste... : ) O ( : Freedom Now |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
WOW, this is outstanding. For the first time in a little while I can say someone actually got the idea of imagery and brought that into their poem without taking away meaning. Pity we can't apprecate such beauties as you described, in our society. AMazing. VEry good write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
rhia_5779 Your remark is a delight to read, thank you. Moonkist Thank you so much. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
your cup of believe delighted my evening eyes Sir Sy... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hmmm....let me close my eyes and think about that a second. Nope, it didn't fade away 'cause I can see it ever so clearly here, Sy, and it is lovely! Thanks for the view. .....jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"But in the blooming of the day The mountain faded dead away" No - the mountain didn't and doesn't ever fade away. We just get distracted. Enjoyed the view painted by your words! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang *sigh* wow |
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Becky Mangrum Member
since 2006-10-18
Posts 56 |
Wellll, What can i say other than Beautiful? I do look for your work also and enjoy your imagination. Becky |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Just when I am of the opinion that it would be impossible for you to surpass the beauty of your previous posts, you prove me wrong ~ and delightfully so!  "I climbed a mountains peak last night To see the streaking of the morn Gods paint brush sweeping colors light A palette full of dew of dawn" ~ divinely glorious, Angel Man. Loving Light and angel smooches, EA |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You have penned a beautiful view for us all to see here. Seymour. Absolutely beautiful. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
I climbed the mountain of my cares To search for morning light I faught my demons hiding there long through the night. And when at length the gray appeared My terrors they did fade I grabbed a steaming pot of JO and started a new day. Thank you for the inspiration! INclan |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You paint a beautiful wish, my friend... maybe someday, it will stay. *S* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy....Morning is my favorite time...I loved yours!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Thank you sweety. |
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