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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2006-10-22 11:08 PM



Well, just to change the lines a little bit, thanks for replying my poems...i like reading them over and over, it cheers me up..thanks!!

Here we go,

Show Me

Show me the way back to your heart
'cause i forgot it long ago
show me how to regain your love
'cause i no longer feel it
show me how to kiss you
'cause now i don't even dream about it

show me
please show me
memories of our past together
show me
help me remember
all about loving you

show me how to hold you in my arms
'cause now i don't remember how
show me how to talk to you
'cause i no longer remember
how to tell you
i love you

show me
just show me
how to dream about you
'cause now all i got is nothing
but nightmares

help me
help me remember
our time together
our best moments
help me remember
how to tell you
i need you

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2006-10-23 07:37 AM


been there before...

what a heartfelt write!

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