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patience_iago
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0 posted 2006-10-22 06:42 PM


My heart hurts when I remember that death is forever.
However, I feel revived
when I see my body rise from the oxygen that fills up my lungs and lowers again as I exhale.

"There are some days where i believe i might die of an overdose of satisfaction"
-Dali
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1 posted 2006-10-22 07:06 PM

wise words...and true feelings.  I don't
feel seeing the last breath of our own
would be such a wonderful feeling or thought.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2006-10-22 09:17 PM

I don't think I mind death much...wondering about the way I will go bothers me a bit
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