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Magnus
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0 posted 2006-10-22 04:11 PM


Suede leather boots with toes of steel
And gloves to match that manly feel.
A khaki shirt with buttons black
To show the men their boss is back.

Her name was Rose with steely blues
That showed all them was she who’d choose.
The wait was long,  the murmurs low
The time was nigh to start her show.

Across that yard she walked her walk
And let them hear her talk her talk.
For she did call the shots you see
This blue eyed gal wore BVDs.

They came across the old dirt lot
To see if Rose was truly hot.
For rumors told she wore the looks
To steal their hearts and bend their hooks

Her voice was calm as was her heart
For Rose knew some would soon depart.
The jobs were culled to those who chose
To feel the thorns of blue eyed Rose.

And to this day she is still there
This woman with her long blonde flair
Who still can walk and talk her way
From here to there and back...they say.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (10-22-2006 08:14 PM).]

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Martie
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1 posted 2006-10-22 04:35 PM


Barry...sounds like she pulled you in, very!
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2 posted 2006-10-22 04:36 PM


sounds like quite a woman!
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3 posted 2006-10-22 04:59 PM


Wow, you render Blue Eyed Rose very vividly, dear Barry!

Love,
Margherita

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4 posted 2006-10-22 07:32 PM


Barry, I'd wager a silver dollar that you're more man than even a broad like that could handle! lol

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

Magnus
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5 posted 2006-10-22 07:34 PM


Thanx bunches M.  We try, we do try....

Linda my dear.....I'll have to think about
it for a while...  Right now, I think I will
use the poetic approach and see how far I
can get...after that, perhaps some tiddlywinks or scrabble...what ya think?

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6 posted 2006-10-22 08:35 PM


Well, personally, I prefer to play Scrabble first ~ and then play tiddlywinks!


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7 posted 2006-10-22 08:37 PM


No wonder....I've had it all backwards for
all of these years...sheesh!!

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8 posted 2006-10-22 09:49 PM


Hmmm..not green eyes and red hair huh?
Was she wearing a hint of WS?  
Bet you were too much man for her Barry!
*Nancy exits, heading back to watch the World Series Game 2*

~Hugs & Love ya~


Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

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9 posted 2006-10-23 12:05 PM



whoa
now that's a woman
would make a man stand up
and take notice

loved her BVD's


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