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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2006-10-22 03:59 PM



Look inside, find
a breath, like a
breeze from flowering forests
under midnight skies of
stars, glittering bright
within your heart. Pale
fluorescent creatures that move
with pronounced athletic sleekness,
caught by moonbeams pulsing
like their warm blood.
A haven for all
who love and live
life, free of tainted
evil actions against each
other and natures majesty.

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Martie
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California
1 posted 2006-10-22 04:03 PM


Goldenrose...I too believe this place is part of everyone...Lovely!
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2006-10-23 08:39 AM


A haven for all
who love and live
life, free of tainted
evil actions against each
other and natures majesty....

Love is the greatest gift of all...reminds me of the garden of Eden, or the heart of God.

lightkeeper
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pluto
3 posted 2006-10-24 05:29 PM


Phil,
       "So truelly heartfelt"

Those who live their lives by the  heart,shall always feel the warmth and know the beauty of its haven

         Love Bernadette xxx

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2006-10-25 07:04 PM


Phil, I love the feel of this, soft and iridescent, a magical hug.
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2006-10-25 09:31 PM


whew....breathtaking!
Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2006-10-26 12:23 PM


Walking within with you ... so beautiful and wise!

Love,
Margherita


Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
7 posted 2006-10-26 12:53 PM


Greetings, Phil!

This is a fine example of why I wish that you would post more often!!!

Big hug,
Linda

Klassy Lassy
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Oregon
8 posted 2006-10-26 08:05 PM


There is hope for the Lion to lie down with the Lamb, for angels to shut the mouths of the beasts, and the splendor of creation to dwell within the hearts of man.  We have today...your words sparkle with possiblity and promise.

~ Klassy


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