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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2006-10-22 01:01 AM



I’m falling faster everyday,
Falling back down,
Into that pit,
That I had to struggle so hard,
To be free off…

All you had to do was give me a little push…

Sitting, seething,
Hardly breathing,
Anger unchecked,
Moment wrecked.

HOW DARE YOU!
Always pushing the blame on me,
Never accepting it yourself,
Now we’re in pieces.
And the severity of the situation,
Finally hits home…

The tears begin to fall,
And I’m ashamed to cry,
In front of you anymore,
It seems you have nothing,
But scorn left for me…
No love…no compassion…

Wanting to talk,
But no, I’m fine.
We’ll never be the same,
We both crossed the line…One too many times…


But at least I can admit it…

"My soul is adrift in oceans of madness
Repairing the rift that you have created"~ Disturbed

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

© Copyright 2006 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
1 posted 2006-10-22 01:16 AM




it hurts Staci
well done

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
2 posted 2006-10-22 08:27 AM


As they say, been there, done that. Once they cross the line, there is no going back. And, yes, it hurts so bad.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2006-10-22 09:55 AM


but at least I can admit it

yeah...that's a sign of maturity and growth and wisdom


Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

4 posted 2006-10-22 05:59 PM


oh neice o'mine...I have told you many times, you are so much stronger than you realize.....and you are still true to yourself..I love that in you Stac.
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