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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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0 posted 2006-10-21 10:37 PM



Discovery

We greet our deepest wishes in our dreams
Awake, or sleeping, such desire deems
Silencing my searching mind with ease
Your mouth upon my mouth in coalesce

Sigh blown, the mist evaporates from sight
Exploring limpid pools intrepid light
The innocence of love returns to call
A deeper presence beckons us to fall

Symmetrical the motion of your touch
To follow trails my fingers tell tale brush
Allowing every moments rhythmic voice
Sensations found in sudden innate choice

A world inside kept secret far from view
Delights our eyes and in our hearts renew
Such exploration sought in passions arms
Perpetual allure conspires hidden charms

Afterglow of fire let low, asleep in happy rain
Upon the beating heart resounding once again
Familiarity once but a passing glance
Has brought divine this epic, sweet romance

Copyright Kkh 10/21/06

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown
1 posted 2006-10-21 11:39 PM


Sounds like a very nice discovery.You wrote this so beautifully. As always!
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
2 posted 2006-10-22 01:23 AM



"We greet our deepest wishes in our dreams"

indeed we do TD
this poem speaks romance
"asleep in happy rain"

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2006-10-22 09:58 AM


for whatever reason, I thought of those Glade Wisps when I read this

heck if I know why that came to my mind, but it's a good write!

Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
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4 posted 2006-10-22 11:38 AM


My dreams have been on the waning side for
months now, or perhaps I just have not
noticed them?  They can be a gift or a curse,
depending on what we see...

May your own always be a gift to you...for
you deserve those moments.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2006-10-22 11:42 AM


quote:
Exploring limpid pools intrepid light
The innocence of love returns to call



Your talent never fails to impress me, dear TD!

Love,
Margherita

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