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MAVBEAR
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0 posted 2006-10-21 11:44 AM



                 Mountain of Tears

Made by mother natures hand,
She wreaked upon this place
We rested our heads,

An  angel's doll lay queitly now,
Piled half way up this mountain,
Soaked still with the water
Of three weeks old,
If one looks close one will find
The tears flows from her still
On this mountain so high,

The mattress she rested her head
Lies in this mountain of tears,
All torn n twisted, dripping still,
Shedding its tears and longing
For the place it once was
With the angel resting with her once more

All the things that fill a home
Now lay in this mountain alone,
No human companion to cherish it
Only the machines now that will
Take away its last breath ,
Crushing the memories that it
Cherishes so

Miles n miles of this, one can see
Five stories high, and still rising
More each day is added here
One's life lay in full view to see
Another doll, another toy truck
The love given by them are gone
All that is left is to destroy
The memories of the child that is no
Longer a part of them

Pictures, pictures every where
A wedding alblum,, a reef of a loved one
Christmas lights that will never see light
Again, so lonely will it be without them
Cabinets , furniture , all over the place
Stacked so high on this mountain of tears

Seem that within this mountain
Some try to console others awaiting the end  
But the tears still run down the mountain
Forming a pool at the base
For another to fall into and once more
Become another victim for the mountain here

One can sit for hours here and see each
And every life that was there, so many
Stories to be told , now quieten in this place
Of no return

The mountain only gets larger every day
Seems the supply of tears are endless,
As the trucks bring them to the mountain here
The human souls are found every where

They say it will end some day, but will it
Ever end , for how can one ever forget what
Has happened here , the lost is great , the
Horror of such a tragedy,
For an angel lost her friend, one she shared
So many secrets with, as she reaches out,
In what must seem a dark place,
For a loving hand, she looks back as they take
Her friend away, with tear filled eyes,
Waving quietly to her friend,

Wishing yesterday was here and
Tommorrow never came



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1 posted 2006-10-21 01:49 PM


OhPoohBear~
Your vivid poetry brings it all back to life~

Such devastation, such loss of life~
You have a tremendous talent, sir~
Thank you for sharing here~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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