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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Moments Moments are the swell of reign All the kingdom of your brain Each kingdom, a wondrous thing The King is dead long live the King Packaged in a package of grime Swaddled in a blanket of time You are the heir placed in care Rule as you will rule as you dare You are a shadow of the white A pantomime in its light The awesome power of the start The very meaning of its art Although you are of flesh and bone You will live to outwear the stone You will stay dimensions of the core Until this one will be no more You will outlive all fantasy But will not stay eternity |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Wow this was gooooood. i read it and wasntt thinking it was about moments, was thinking it was about an empire or civilizatiion. Then at the end, I was like wow , it totally fits, So true. Honored to have read this. |
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Becky Mangrum Member
since 2006-10-18
Posts 56 |
Yes, had me going too.I love it. Call me old fashion but i still like the ones that rhyme. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The kingdom of your brain is a swell realm!  Good morning, Mr. T.! May you have a glorious day! Loves 'n hugs 'n angel kisses, EA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Moments are gone so fast I wish that some would last  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
rhia_5779 Enjoyed your reply, thank you. Becky, Me too, thank you. Earth Angel My favorite hugs and kisses are from Angels.  Martie Only in memory.  |
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MAVBEAR Junior Member
since 2006-10-19
Posts 33Louisiana |
enjoyed the write very much Mr.T,,,for the short moment we are here , we can share so much with them and leave them as part of the moments past for the ones of the future to enjoy and learn MAV |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You are never short on insight or wisdom... in all forms, shapes and sizes. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MAVBEAR You got the idea, thanks for the read and comment. Barry, First smile of the day, thanks. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
sir sy  such a pleasure to read you again~My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Such a pleasure to have you read me again. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Another fantastic write Dear Sir. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
and a moment spent with you Sir Sy is a jewel... I liked this jewel a lot |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Thank you sweety. Lady You do say the nicest things. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
missed this yesterday but so glad I have the day off so I can catch up! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I dare say your "pen" is a "wondrous thing". The present moment is all we have and we have the choice right now to make it "heaven" or "hell" ... indeed we are the kings of our time. Beautiful, wise poet, your poetry is always a gift. Have a beautiful Sunday. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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