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Nothing Really Matters Under The Rain
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Nothing Really Matters Under The Rain |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
Thanks, as always, to all those who have been reading my poems..and also to those who have helped me to improve my writing!.. Here we go Nothing Really Matters Under The Rain I'm walking under the rain thinking about you it's cold i'm getting wet it's one of those days that you have to stay at home but i don't care 'cause nothing really matters under the rain nothing bothers me only the idea only that sad sensation of you leaving when this rain ends but i don't want to see you leaving my life 'cause nothing really matters under the rain nothing bothers me only the idea of you leavin when the rain ends and i know that i might not see you again 'cause you are just like this rainy day nothing really matters to you that's why i'm taking a walk just to wash my tears away the tears of forget the tears of forgive tears that do not matter to me now 'cause nothing really matters under the rain |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Denis, How can you thank us for reading things such as this? They are so worthy of the reading. We thank YOU! Lovely work. The imagery is fantastic, but it is the thought behind these words that capture. Sandra |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The following lines were especially moving for me ~ "that's why i'm taking a walk just to wash my tears away" Loving Light, Earth Angel  |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
thank you thank you for your warm comments.. makes me keep posting, cause i know that my poems will be welcomed warmly. thanks again Denis. |
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