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fmlbarebackrider2001
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0 posted 2006-10-20 10:53 PM



Women sleep easy with roughly gentle men by their side
Their hulking shadows, their snores, do make their fears abide
Rough men sleep sound anear soft, fierce mate
Her love his soul's scars abate

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

© Copyright 2006 Cory - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-10-20 10:54 PM


welp...in my case, if he snores, he's on the couch! LOL
fmlbarebackrider2001
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2 posted 2006-10-20 10:55 PM


lol had to add it since we all know how men can be

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

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3 posted 2006-10-21 03:09 PM


I myself prefer "gentle" men ~ but not too gentle! lol


Linda

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4 posted 2006-10-21 07:29 PM


Enjoyed...James
fmlbarebackrider2001
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5 posted 2006-10-22 09:50 AM


Thanks for the nice words. Was a short little poem in responce to something my boyfriend says. The first line is actually something he says when I can't sleep.

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

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