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I'm Sorry
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I'm Sorry |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
“I’m so sorry!” That’s all I ever seem to say Did you make me this way? So afraid to stand up for myself Putting my feelings up on a shelf Forcing smiles and lifeless laughter I’m beginning to see There is no happily ever after I’m sorry if I get in the way I’m sorry if I haven’t made your day I’m sorry that I can’t stop crying I’m sorry that I won’t stop trying Should I be sorry for even exiting too? Am I really that offensive to you? I’m sorry that I’m so confused Even though it’s my feelings that have been abused If only I could stay angry and strong Instead of feeling dirty and wrong Sorry I don’t know what to do I’m truly sorry that I can't protect me From you |
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Becky Mangrum Member
since 2006-10-18
Posts 56 |
That came straight from the soul. I have goose bumps. I feel your pain in that poem. Beautiful, yet sooo sad. |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Thank you Becky. I'm happy you liked it! I don't really like to put up "Woe is me" poetry but today I don't give a flip... Today is one of those day's where you look out the window and say to yourself "This day just isn't for me" and hide under the covers hoping the world doesn't find you and pull you're lazy buns out of bed. ~Kira |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kira san...today is a new day, jump up and take it by the handles and hang on..enjoyed the soul here |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Hi Dark Stranger! Thankyou much for the lovely comment! (I'll try and do just that) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a lot of feeling here Kira enjoyed it I agree with Stranger just try this day it might be a good one... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Kira, no one can make you feel any way you don't want to feel...you are strong and in control of yourself!  Life is too short for bumpy roller coasters  |
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banished_fairy Junior Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 31Happy in H*ll, PA |
Wow. I was right there with you, feeling this lump in my throat. I know exactly how it feels to bear that "responsiblity", whether it is yours or not. Beautifully expressed. Thank you for the read. |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Thanx all for the nice comments! Hugs and Hershey bars for all of you wonderful poets! |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Kira you blow me away with your poetry i loved this it had a beautiful flow. the thing is i was looking for my favorite stanza and i absolutly couldn't find one i loved it all amazing write. hope to read more soon... hunnie  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kira, I ditto all of the above! Your poem elicited some wonderful replies! ~ including the ones that you wrote!  Loving hug, Linda |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Kira, You poetry is great. I hope you enjoyed my tribute to you on my " PIP Poets Who Make My Day Bright" post. Cheers, Jessica |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Excellent! Exactly right, but so often we can't see that we're not at fault. Because we've always been taught that we are. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
Such sad beauty, written through what seems to be experience. Such sand beauty, thanks As darkness covers the land, the fun has just begun |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
What do you do when you look around your circle of friends and find too many that are controlling and manipulative and judgemental and critical... You start trading them in for new friends that are loving and caring and accepting and forgiving...and then you will not have to say you are sorry for everything...James |
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