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Everything Worth Everything
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Everything Worth Everything |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Everything Worth Everything Rendering free form of all my heart can hold Obsidian sculptures deep down forge the mold Blessed gently the seconds each beat in remand Ever cherished these feelings just slight of your hand Remembered with honor, such curious court Touched deeply within me, love sounds in cohort One wish in its rapture, aurora to capture, affections consort Copyright Kkh 10/20/06 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (10-20-2006 08:36 AM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD "Rendering free form of all my heart can hold" Lovely poem as always!  |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
Hi, TD. I didn't catch the main idea here, but it is a lovely-worded poem. Maybe I'm just dense today! I'm off to find some Ginkgo Biloba. I'm going to need it, apparently!  John I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ When you rhyme internally ... it is soooo effective~ 'One wish in its rapture, aurora to capture' *sighing* at the very all of this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Don't feel bad John, when she gets going, nothing can stop her or keep up with her. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
delightful TD and that last line IS a treat... |
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