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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-10-19 05:00 PM



Fluency

Some days it's all that I can do:
a line thought here, responding to
and though the meaning be obscure
I counter think and make it more.

Sometimes because of lacking self
my history sits 'pon a shelf
in picture words, when multiplied
leave flat-lined thinking... love denied.

So pardon me, in naked thought
in greed of past in which I'm caught,
surrendering to letting go
in tapestry of words pieced so.

In time the need begins spread thin
erasing all the sad within.
The fluent, see? expressed... restrained
returns to haunt this mind, contained.

And so I write this nonsensed rhyme
to while away the gain in time,
until the night falls in between
inducing sleep upon the scene.

M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2006-10-19 05:53 PM


Maureen,
This is an excellent write. I understand.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2006-10-19 08:23 PM


*Nodding in understanding here*
Well said Maureen.
Heart hugs.

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-10-19 11:39 PM


yeah I understand too

it's important to take some time for yourself

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