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Strathaniel
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0 posted 2006-10-19 03:21 AM


note: words in " are alterations necessary to post this here.

"I"

So hypnotized
By your disquise
Those aren't your eyes
So don't deny
How hard you try
It makes me just, break down and cry.
Why do you lie?
I wish I'd die
But its no comply
Cuz my brain is fried
Can't choose a side
I'm too dignified
Hand up your thigh
What a tasty pie
This fantasy's not justified
And I'm alive
Baby touch the sky
Then tell me why
You play the spy
I mean, not to pry
But the knots been tied
It's gone awry
That bird did fly
On such poor motive I can't rely
And then you ask, who is this guy?
Girl come on by
And take a ride.
I mean no harm, you can testify
Look I'm clean, baby like my tie?
It's love like this that you cannot buy.
Now let's comprimise
And my "thing" might rise
Do it baby now! while your thoughts are wise
Come on quick "girl", I won't ask ya twice
Damn, look at me, you got me cold as ice.
To think, this all started so golden nice.
And now you look at me like I'm disqualified.
Now I'll hit the rye
Get retarded high
Think of all the ways that I can rectify
Let it subside
Maybe let it slide
Push it aside
I want to hide
Write you a letter in which I could confide
How I drown in my tears, like a too high tide.
And you reply
Your words amplify
"We don't co-inside"
Settin' all these rules by which I must abide
Think about the end, it just makes me sigh
You were my prize
How hard I tried
Get the hell away, my friends did advise.
But I thought not twice
And I rolled the dice
Stuck on to you like white on rice
You'd tantilize
And theyed scrutinize
Your a drug theyed refuse to just legalize
I was magnitized
By your hearts size
And your love for lives
Brains like Bill Nye
Again, I'm so mesmorized
That I'll take the dive
Try to cut a slice
With these brand new knives
That you provide
We can't divide
I can't memorize
That again and again I get pulverized!

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Strathaniel
Junior Member
since 2006-10-17
Posts 12

1 posted 2006-10-19 03:22 AM


"damn" was supposed to be in quotes.
Strathaniel
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since 2006-10-17
Posts 12

2 posted 2006-10-19 03:23 AM


"I" is the title and not quoted as per changes. lol... thats it.
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