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Open Poetry #39

Rainbows In The Night

william foos
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since 2006-09-13

Posts 77
schenectady,new york,usa

0 posted 2006-10-18 03:25 PM

as the thunder storm passed
i found a healing for my soul
for it was during the fullest of moon
when i saw that rainbow at night
for the colors were somewhat muted
but still for all to see
as i watched
it was as if a spirit took me
on a travel
to a distant land and shore
where angels bathed their wings of light
and smiled with peace and joy
then a concert for me they did play
on the harps of finest gold
they made me cry and
before i could speak
i knew i was dead

i see what i write and write what i see

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2006-10-18 03:57 PM

william....it is not easy to see into and beyond death, but if you can, then the other side must be beautiful.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2006-10-18 04:08 PM

A brief but beautiful glimpse to the other side.
Well done.
Hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

3 posted 2006-10-18 06:23 PM

'i found a healing for my soul
for it was during the fullest of moon
when i saw that rainbow at night'

Brief, but very expressive
one of my favourites
just Excellent.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-10-18 11:13 PM

I cannot choose a favorite line william
it's all remarkable...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2006-10-18 11:22 PM

I always said that rainbows could be seen at night

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