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Song of Wind
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Song of Wind |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Song of Wind Across the desert this song of wind in plastic bag gets lodged against a fence and Styrofoam cups lace the cactus like flowers the beauty stung by necter of carelessness in winsome write she penned again of lands that danced beneath her feet calling all greenery her very own bearing thoughts like prospects sweet used to be across time to the horizon purity would fill the sand now to dig down to that place takes shovels full of grace timeless bent by warranty that there by God one stands for we for what we have is blessed by far time not yet for naked stars cast me out with thoughts of wind but litter my soul not again breathe sweet now land sweep up the broken peace make time a blotter that absorbs the waste of mans release turn glorious again the throng with poem's mending song though if a word should slip my hand upon the paper blotting same should you catch the poem's write and the very poet's name put me then upon a shelf for some one place should be so rare as to catch the words of one though tumbled weed made threadbare sift the clay with lullaby so dear love makes all brand new and takes the dust from covered helm so wrapped the words are sky of blue ---------- A day with Sunshine....a favorite duet  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
On this Santa Ana day, thank you, Sissie!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is so gorgeous and I am so envious! I can't do duets to save my life but here are my two of my favorite ladies, creating a masterpiece for all to enjoy!! And for that, I am thankful. makes me sigh good work you two! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A most beautiful duet!! It's as though you both dipped your pens into the same ink spill. Your words and thoughts blend perfectly. Hugs to you both. Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Sissie...one of my favorites of "ours". Thank you so much for bringing this home during the Santa Ana times... because they speak to one, y'know. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you two shine!!! Paul |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Two stars shining on the same page, thank you for this both of you.. Goldenrose. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love this Song of Wind, the tunes of your hearts have found their way to be recorded on the page, sharing beauty. Love and compliments! Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You go girls....you go! Well done ladies...how sad and true of man's waste that dots the land...I could see it very clearly. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
graceful as the wind as she courtsies to her sky lovely words lovely ladies |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (does happy duet dance) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo precious, dearest friends, your verses blend soooooooo beautifully together like wildflowers on the watershed gleaming with the zephyr giggles, yay! (smiles) I'm keeping this duet in my angelic library, yay, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet friends, thank you both for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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