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The couple i knew
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The couple i knew |
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ainok New Member
since 2006-10-18
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They were true lovers i heard i saw them together She was very beautiful He was violent and he was agressive They loved each other They lived together They died together on the bed where they always made love away from the whispers they were only twenty five years old I did not see the funeral i just wrote this one day to remember for good that happiness is harbitwerness and friteawaaking is the ghuislesly way to roreila the weird uiertastan na kpeganaou ta kwaatre seeeiii aouu the horror nights of nar dah Dwqeerrr |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ainok~ Welcome to PiP ... I can feel the passionate thoughts in the first part of your penning ... but I think it would help me to understand more if you could give me a translation of the words that are new for me - quote:WELCOME to this dynamic circle of poetic friendships~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! A wonderful heartfelt penning. Yes please, could you give us the meaning of some of the words Marge Tindal commented on? I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Welcome to Passions ainok! Really enjoyed you're write. (I wanna know the the meaning of the words Marge Tindal commented on too!) Anywho, nice work and I hope to see more soon! Hugs and Hershey bars for the new member! |
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