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Marsha
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0 posted 2006-11-03 02:17 PM


Is It Yours or Is It Mine?


A poem written by Suthern, Marsha and Kethry
After seeing a sign on Plagiarism
at Kent University, Canterbury Campus.





We love each other dearly
we’re really close to heart
and sometimes when all my words end
yours already start

We write verses together
as poets often do
but sometimes when I see your name
it gives another clue…

to what you might be thinking
an insight to your plan.
Then I see the words are mine
and realise it’s a scam.

You says it’s inspiration
but when I recognise
all the words you’ve written down
it opens up my eyes!

Each syllable familiar,
I’ve seen these words before
but are they mine or are they yours?
I’m never really sure.

When you raid my closet
the ownership is known
but when we’re talking written word,
you claim my thoughts your own

I strive to find the right words
ones that tell the tale
to see them under your name
makes me want to wail.

My writing’s not a recipe
to alter at your ease
you only changed the title
and called my work your piece

You took my perspiration
and claimed it as your own
accept congratulations and
know our friendship’s blown

They say that you’re a poet
perhaps they’re speaking true
but sharing words is one thing,
stealing words - a coup.

Accept felicitations
from foes and friends as well
but from this moment onwards
I wish you’d rot in hell.

© Kethry, Marsha and Suthern


Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-12-2006 08:03 PM).]

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1 posted 2006-11-03 02:26 PM


There are three to draw to who could write anything and I would read it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2006-11-03 02:37 PM


Ladies~
All three of you (as well as a host of others) would know how I feel about this piece !!!

I applaud you ladies ... what a beautiful trio of poets gathered~

Oh ... shucky darn ... I wish I was there !!!


MarshaLovie, Kethry and SuthernGal ... *HUGLETS* to you all~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -           noles1@totcon.com       

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3 posted 2006-11-03 05:51 PM


But dear ones, if I didn't thieve I wouldn't be me, now would I?  You want me to be true to myself, right? Well then.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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4 posted 2006-11-04 09:47 PM


Bravo! Not only is this a well written and nicely rhymed piece, it touches on a subject that really pushes my buttons. I think there is a special place in Hell for those poem pirates. You three write so well together I'd never guess this didn't come from one pen. Great stuff here. Take care and Have fun. Steve


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5 posted 2006-11-08 04:30 PM


  Dear love,
There's no picture but still a good poem worth a bump.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2006-11-08 06:00 PM



Yeah ... I say it too~

You girls are having ALL THE FUN !!!
I wanna be there !!!!!

Love the three-o of you muchly~
*HUGLETS*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -         noles1@totcon.com     

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7 posted 2006-11-08 06:07 PM


Suthern, Marsha and Kethry,
Congrads and well done.

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8 posted 2006-11-08 09:25 PM


absolutely astounding!
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9 posted 2006-11-08 11:00 PM


~ The 2nd to the last the last stanza makes it crystal clear. Enjoyed!

~ And don't ever think I don't forget our days prior to Piptalk ... yes, I am talking to both Marsha and Kethry.

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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2006-11-12 08:03 PM



Ladies, I'm sorry that you weren't able
to post this sign, so I hoped to help you
along.  So wonderful to touch base with
all of you again!




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11 posted 2006-11-13 09:45 AM


I certainly thank Karilea for adding the 'inspire' for this piece~



Waste, indeed!!

*Huglets
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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12 posted 2006-11-13 10:45 AM


Well done Ladies!!
Enjoyed the write and 'seeing' you all again!
Heart hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

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13 posted 2006-11-13 12:16 PM


Let the plagiaristic pirates beware! The mighty poetess trio is en garde!!! ~ and Hell is a most formidable place!

Hopefully any aspiring plagiarist who might be reading this post, will be thwarted from stealing the poetic efforts of others!

Good job, Ladies!



Linda

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14 posted 2006-11-13 06:14 PM


Thank you very muchly Kari, and that sign is drummed into all students at Kent Uni. We were there at the University in Canterbury because we were waiting for Gray, who is a student there. Since we had to wait while he had his meeting and this sign had stuck in our heads, we wrote it together over coffee. Isn't it amazing what we writers find to stir the idea pot?

Anyway after writing the poem we went into Canterbury and went into the Cathedral, and everyone it really is incredibly beautiful. We stood on the spot where Thomas Becket was murdered, and therefore became a martyr. Keth took some amazing pictures of the stained glass windows. (I took some too, but they were far from good).
Thanks everyone for reading this, and thanks again Kari for putting the poster up
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
x x x x x
Ladies, I miss you both so much, come back soon and stay longer next time

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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15 posted 2006-11-16 02:49 PM


I miss so much by wandering in and out of this place instead of setting my brake and sticking around for a while! Three of my favorites, people and poets, all in one poem -- and I missed it......

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Kethry
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16 posted 2006-11-16 04:21 PM


Seems to me that you didn't miss it Ed...and you know what they say better late than never.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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17 posted 2006-11-16 04:58 PM


Suthern, Marsha and Kethry,

Wonderfully written!

You've got to love that slap in the face ending.  


Omnia vincit amor

TP

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18 posted 2006-11-16 11:43 PM


Uh-huh.....but some of the most important people also say, "better never than late".......I'm glad this particular case wasn't one of those!

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19 posted 2006-11-17 04:26 PM


I can't read this without remembering the fun it was writing with the two of you... Duets have been few and far between for me... I never dreamed I'd be part of a trio... or that the words would come so easily I could barely write them down fast enough! *S*
I would say I was sorry I left the two of you with clean-up duties... but you did such a great job I'm not sorry at all! *S*

It was truly a privilege, dear friends... thank you so very much!!!

Kethry
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20 posted 2006-11-19 06:12 AM


Welcome home dear lady, Though summer was waning and winter came on...didn't we make our own sunshine?

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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21 posted 2006-11-22 12:07 PM


even worse when they steal your words then acuse you of stealing theirs~

ya know we have same name and same nickname, hubby gave me the nickname, i cant stand it.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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22 posted 2006-11-22 12:37 PM


  It's so easy for someone to steal your poetry off the internet. I have a tendancy to send myself a copy of every poem I write in snail mail, dated and signed by me and left sealed. Don't know if it actually does any good, but at least it's some attempt to safeguard. Anyway, loved the poem.
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23 posted 2007-03-05 08:28 PM


Niiice! I'm sorry that you were plagiarized, but look at that! You found inspiration to write another smashing poem. I really enjoyed it. Right on!

April-Lyn

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