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The Cinder in Your Kiss

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Grinch
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0 posted 11-03-2006 02:09 PM       View Profile for Grinch   Email Grinch   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Grinch


The cinder in your kiss is sweetly sour,
Blown soft to tease my needy itch,
Yet only glimpsed in lapses of your cuckoo mask
When dollar signs play cataracts
The facade slips.

Loves little whispers twist upon your tongue
That forks the promise of desire;
Cold venom masqueraded in the scent of sin
A sirenís shroud veiled in a smile
Of silky lips.

Soft flesh entwines me in a passions grip;
A hollow arched pretence of bliss;
Feigned slip of earth  - my heaven cursed with little lies
All leaves me lost but blinded by
Your love my lust.

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Pilgrimage
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1 posted 11-03-2006 05:59 PM       View Profile for Pilgrimage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pilgrimage

This one has bite. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 11-03-2006 07:37 PM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

Strong and edgy...
Sometimes the evidence of bite offers the unveiling of much tenderness.
TD
Martie
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3 posted 11-03-2006 07:48 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Grinch....I'd say watch but enjoy first. Words so formed to make me think that, and formed well.
passing shadows
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4 posted 11-03-2006 10:28 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I love it!
TomMark
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5 posted 01-06-2008 09:29 PM       View Profile for TomMark   Email TomMark   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TomMark

I am quiet sure that the soft sense of this  verse "Soft flesh entwines me in a passions grip;"  only appeared once here among all your writing.

Love this one.
 
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