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AltairVonCreed
Junior Member

since 2006-10-16

Posts 14
Nephi, Utah.

0 posted 2006-10-18 01:54 AM

The blackness that comes when these eyes of mine close.
Is greeted with arms wide open in joy.
The blackness paints pictures of maurading decent.
A life of mine that was not completly meant.

A world rests, nestled in my mind.
It longs to be free, and reality is gone.
I tried to stay it, but it's been locked up for so long.
The blackness paints pictures of a lovers caress.

I see sparkling blue eyes, a crystaline water.
Laughter as clear as a porcilien bell.
Wicked long fingers, and jagged nails.
A flawless beauty, a temptress of hell.

I see hands cupped together in friendship;
Walking arm in arm down the street.
Lighting flashes in a rapid torrent.
A ball of dancing, they shall meet.

Perfectly gilded lips are pursed;
Awanting, mine to hers to meet.
A tilt of the head, and just a brief touch.
I honestly think, I'd like it to much.

When I close my eyes,
The things I see.
Are so alike, a twisted reality.
I shant mind, as long as they stay.
Within my mind, gone with the day.

I invision my arms wrapped around a waist;
Two sizes just right, Dance through the night.
Hair twirls and a delightful arc.
Listen now, to the night time lark.

I seem to have lost;
my sense of flow.
So I'll end this sweet;
with, "I want you so."

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

1 posted 2006-10-18 08:10 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

This is a great first entry for the blue pages.
I definately look forward to reading more of your thoughts.

Please check your e-mail for a special greeting.

You may burn my flag... only after you wrap yourself in it first.
www.myspace.com/mindlesspoet

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-10-18 08:19 AM

The flow of your words are a cascade of the heart...when you cease to listen, the image ends...the same for all of us.

Welcome to Passions.

I loved the imagery from inside your eyes.
TD

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

3 posted 2006-10-18 02:08 PM

I am delighted I did not miss this! A wonderful entry that speaks tomes of your gift. I look forward to more of you.

Welcome to passions.

Sandra

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2006-10-21 11:52 PM

Welcome to PIP enjoyed and look forward to reading many more of your works!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2006-10-22 12:35 PM

a warm welcome to you!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2006-10-22 01:05 AM

"I invision my arms wrapped around a waist;
Two sizes just right, Dance through the night.
Hair twirls and a delightful arc."

wonderful first post
more please?

welcome Altair

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2006-10-22 11:20 AM

"Two sizes just right" Love that twist of words, Altair. Welcome!

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